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Tiger Lily

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This is concentration #2! They're not actually physically connected, I guess... I mean, the tiger does have a lily pad in the stripes... but that's minor. XD It's mostly the size factor here! If you have any suggestions for improvement, it'd be greatly appreciated!
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The first thing I noticed was its front left paw. It's bend at what looks like an extremely uncomfortable angle. For the shading of the piece, it looks like you went crazy with the dodge tool. The rocks look good, but it's like you gave up on the rest of the work. Only parts of the lily are shading underneath the tiger, while other parts are forgotten.
It also looks like you love the smudge and blur tool. Not really the best of tools to use. It may get the job done, but it looks horrible in the long run and you really don't learn anything for future reference. It also makes the eyes look very odd, because everything around them is smudged and blurred, almost like it's out of focus, while the eyes are perfectly clear.
I like the water droplets on the leaf. I think you did a good job giving them depth. I've seen so many where it just looks like shiny, flat circles that are just hanging out on an object.