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This is what comes from final week stress. :XD: Now I'll do what I'm supposed to be doing. o_o

For the record: I. HATE. BRICKS. REMIND ME NEVER TO DRAW THEM. EVER.

This is more of a Breaker of The Code thing...

This picture is based off the Cooperate legends surrounding Kai's little traitor incident. Here's the summary:

Kai left the Cooperates and was then considered a high-risk traitor, for which the penalty is execution. So the Cooperates carried out the penalty and threw him in an old empty prison cell as an example. However, the cooperates hadn't really thought through the fact that they trained him up for the sole purpose of surviving any physical trauma, and overlooked the little tiny fact that he was actually still alive.

He eventually recovered, regained his strength, and made a break for it. But he got caught, because he was still relatively weak. After a few break outs and secret recapturings, rumors started to spread that Kai's ghost was running around looking for vengeance. Some said his ghost just wanted to escape the castle walls. Some said he was clearly dead and it was all nonsense.

Some even went as far to say he was still alive...
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Yay, kaipai! : D I wish i could give you a proper critique, but I don't like the star system that much ( I don't know what some of the ratings mean... : p) So, um this is sorta a critique... Just without the stars.... Oh, what the heck, I'll give you five for everything just for kicks.

This picture has a really good concept and mood going for it. I really like Kai's expression. It's all like he's making a comeback. So mysterious.. *.* .One thing that kind of bothered me was Kai's arm positions... The pose is kind of awkward to me. I know that its supposed to be uncomfortable, but if someone were to be um, "hung" like that, their shoulder bones would probably pop out. D; poor kaipai.. (Or maybe that's what the cooperates wanted to do, those sickos.... >.>) The hands look quite weird even though they are supposed to be covered in fur.... I know fairy foxes have no defined anatomy, so I guess I'm being a bit hard on you.

You've got most of your shading in all of the right places, I think. Kai's pupils and cornea? could use a bit more blending within the eye. I know how you feel about your bricks, and I'll say they do look a little fuzzy... It's like a wall of Kaipai : D The light on Kaipai needs a little blending with the background, but I guess that depends whether the light is focused or scattered. Kai's hair is a bit thick, so you could add more strands to make it more realistic, but I can understand if that's just your style. You've improved with your fur, I see... everything, really.

Hope this critique helped you instead of giving you a headache. It's so darn long... And sorry I fangirled about kaipai during the whole thing. He's just so cuuuute. :3 The only one like like better than him is Andre. (Why do I always like the psychos?) Anyway, I just wanted you to know, I've watched these series' of yours since third grade and I lurve them. I don't care what people say. These are my shows! : )